Нашла поклонника моего литературного творчества Sharky
точнее, поэзии)

вот сегодняшнее. Первое из всех, написанное с учетом эмоций! Чувствую прогресс.

i'm lost again and now forever.
no one can really take me home,
because my home used to be there
in a place no one have known

no one but you, who showed me
within the darkest deep of night
some things, that will be never seen
with opened eyes in midday light

the day before it was as always,
but i can't even live today.
sure, you won't keep your promise!
i'll try myself to find new way...